Advices for my decks

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shadanto avatarshadanto 8 days
{"ops":[{"insert":"Hello everyone, I would like any advice for some of my decks, the goal is not to have the most optimal deck but more to know if there are not big inconsistencies or really disturbing mistakes.\n\nThank you for taking the time to answer me!!\n\n\nThe wise mothman, mill and counters +1\nhttps://archidekt.com/decks/19102511/radiation\n\nVren, destruct everything and make an army of rats\nhttps://archidekt.com/decks/19102485/vren\n\nHope estheim, gain life, wincon if possible or mill everyone\nhttps://archidekt.com/decks/19038168/espoir\n\nHearthhull, I like this one but my opponents always kill me before my strategy come up\nhttps://archidekt.com/decks/16535344/coquefoyer\n"}]}
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Mithrias avatarMithrias 8 days
{"ops":[{"insert":"Hi,\nbesides a second copy of "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Marcus, Mutant Mayor"}},{"insert":" in your Mothman deck no glaring mistakes, as far as I can see.\nThe mothman deck appears overall solid, maybe a little light on interaction.\nThe Vren deck has currently multiple different death-replacement effects that undermine each other and could do with some more ramp and recursion effects and maybe a couple of sac outlets to more reliable trigger "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Grave Pact"}},{"insert":". Maybe run "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Attrition"}},{"insert":" instead of "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Butcher of Malakir"}},{"insert":".\nThe Hope deck desperately needs more card draw and could also use a couple of tutors for your combo-pieces as well as mana-efficient counter spells to force them through. Since almost nobody likes to play against combo-mill those decks need to be ready to play mean and utterly ruthless; "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Harbinger of the Seas"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Grafdigger's Cage"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Winter Moon"}},{"insert":" etc.\n\nOverall I would recommend spending some time on the mana bases of most of those decks and focus on nonbasics that can enter untapped like the checklands ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Glacial Fortress"}},{"insert":"), fastlands ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Seachrome Coast"}},{"insert":"), painlands ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Adarkar Wastes"}},{"insert":"), slowlands ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Deserted Beach"}},{"insert":") and shockduals ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Hallowed Fountain"}},{"insert":") - the majority of these have seen a couple of reprints by now and should be relativly cheap.\n"}]}
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shadanto avatarshadanto 7 days
{"ops":[{"insert":"Ok ok I see, thanks for recommandations ! Winter Moon could be kind of rude !! :o\n"}]}
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