Need help with group slug deck

{"ops":[{"insert":"Hi,\nthese are the cards I would cut:\n"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Sower of Discord"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Indulging Patrician"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Marauding Blight-Priest"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Starscape Cleric"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Phyrexian Arena"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Creeping Bloodsucker"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Revenge of Ravens"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Cryptolith Fragment // Aurora of Emrakul"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Isolation Cell"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Loyal Subordinate"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Monologue Tax"}},{"insert":" those are too weak in my oppinion. \n"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Mindcrank"}},{"insert":" works best for a dedicated mill or reanimate strategy. \n"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Crypt Ghast"}},{"insert":" since you currently have no way to tutor for "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth"}},{"insert":" the deck has to few swamps.\n\nHere are some suggestions to include:\n"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Generous Gift"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Teferi's Protection"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Boromir, Warden of the Tower"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Gix, Yawgmoth Praetor"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Trouble in Pairs"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Farewell"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Ripples of Undeath"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Mangara, the Diplomat"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Archivist of Oghma"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Archaeomancer's Map"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Opposition Agent"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Bontu's Monument"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Demonic Counsel"}},{"insert":" \n"}]}

{"ops":[{"insert":"I'd cut "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Mindcrank"}},{"insert":" - AFAICT, you can't leverage opponents' graveyards, so most of the time, it'll just fuel your opponents (as most opponents will lose to the life loss before milling out). Has "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Maralen of the Mornsong"}},{"insert":" worked for you? I imagine your opponents won't let you untap with her (though admittedly, she is funny with "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Ob Nixilis, Unshackled"}},{"insert":" - which I'd also probably cut unless you have a tutor-heavy playgroup... if you do keep it, consider adding a "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Demolition Field"}},{"insert":" and/or "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Field of Ruin"}},{"insert":" to force everyone to search!)\n\nI'd cut one of "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Exsanguinate"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Debt to the Deathless"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Fraying Omnipotence"}},{"insert":" \n\nYou could consider "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Breena, the Demagogue"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Firemane Commando"}},{"insert":", and "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Gix, Yawgmoth Praetor"}},{"insert":" for card-advantage that incentives your opponents to attack each other. Similarly, "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Eye of Nidhogg"}},{"insert":" or "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Parasitic Impetus"}},{"insert":". \n\nI don't see much in the way of protection for your board. Maybe "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Reprieve"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Cauldron Haze"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Protection Magic"}},{"insert":", etc. \nSimilarly, I see minimal interaction for your opponents (admittedly, aristocrats-esque decks often rely on \"I'll drain you out\" but sometimes that's not fast enough). "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Single Combat"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Divine Reckoning"}},{"insert":" may fit well. "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Extinction Event"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Soul Shatter"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Sheoldred's Edict"}},{"insert":". "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Return to Dust"}},{"insert":" is still effective. \n\n"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Haliya, Guided by Light"}},{"insert":" seems good here. I'd also try to fit in another 1-3 pieces of ramp. Good luck!\n"}]}