Making this as a gift — I have only played a few times. Help please!!

{"ops":[{"insert":"Hi,\nfor more specific advise there a couple of questions:\nIs the recipient also a new player?"},{"attributes":{"list":"bullet"},"insert":"\n"},{"insert":"What Bracket are you aiming at / is the deck for a casual or competitive environment?"},{"attributes":{"list":"bullet"},"insert":"\n"},{"insert":"What is your budget?"},{"attributes":{"list":"bullet"},"insert":"\n"},{"insert":"Are you looking for a stronger demon-kindred subtheme?"},{"attributes":{"list":"bullet"},"insert":"\n"},{"insert":"\nAs a general advice I would recommend to either improve the ramp-package or cut some of the expensive cards. Also you're currently running to many 4 drops, that compete with the Commander.\nThere are some cheap two-colored nonbasics and utility lands like: "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Sundering Eruption // Volcanic Fissure"}},{"insert":" , "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Bojuka Bog"}},{"insert":" , "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Blackcleave Cliffs"}},{"insert":" , "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Graven Cairns"}},{"insert":" to mostly cut down on the basics.\nSince the Commander has a very big target on its head here are some spells for protection that might be of interest to you: "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Not Dead After All"}},{"insert":" , "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Armor of Shadows"}},{"insert":" , "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Bolt Bend"}},{"insert":" , "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Imp's Mischief"}},{"insert":" .\nIn the same vain I would include some additional draw spells like "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Faithless Looting"}},{"insert":" , "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Night's Whisper"}},{"insert":" , "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Demand Answers"}},{"insert":" .\n"}]}