Help for my Rin and Seri Deck

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Rosgrimma avatarRosgrimma
{"ops":[{"insert":"This is my very first deck for Commander and while I tried reading up general recommendations for deckbuilding and tried to find research what other people do, somehow my Rin and Seri deck doesn't fly. \n\nWhat I try to do:\n\nBuild tons of cats and dogs tokens, pump them up and overrun the opponent"},{"attributes":{"list":"bullet"},"insert":"\n"},{"insert":"\nMy problem with the deck:\nDuring a few playtests it seems to be slow in developing and kind of vulnerable to interference from opponent's actions - but that's based on a few trial plays only.\nI never actually got to the point where I get a decent amount of token creatures. \nThe two times I actually won with the deck was when I got Ugin out at the right time (who can be kind of a win-con in itself, right?). And while it's nice to actually win a game, this isn't really what I was trying to do with the deck. \n\nHere's the deck https://archidekt.com/decks/1430514#Rin_and_Seri_Inseparable \nThe Maybeboard contains cards I own that I feel could go well with the deck but aren't in use - because at some point I had to cut.\n\nDoes anybody have suggestions on how to improve the deck? \n"}]}
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jobroskie avatarjobroskie
{"ops":[{"insert":"OK so the 2 big things I see are that you need more ramp and you need more reliable card draw. \n\nThis deck needs "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Skullclamp"}},{"insert":" . Pay 1 to sack a 1/1 and draw 2 is amazing.\n\nYou have green, use it for ramp. "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Wild Growth"}},{"insert":" is amazing value wise. \n\nYou also could use changelings. "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Mirror Entity"}},{"insert":" both creates a cat and a dog but also pumps your tokens. "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Crib Swap"}},{"insert":" is removal that creates a cat and dog token when played\n"}]}
Edited 7/20/2021, 12:29:44 AM
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moffmojo avatarmoffmojo
{"ops":[{"insert":"well, im not very experienced..... but depending.... try adding a couple more land cards?\n"}]}
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Pyro1 avatarPyro1
{"ops":[{"insert":"I can't see the list because the link isn't working, but have you tried using changelings? Since they're both a dog and a cat, you'd get double tokens.\n"}]}
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